Chore routine story with twist from @slickstevietv
The creator narrates a story about his weekly chore arrangement with his partner, showing her cleaning inside while he supposedly cleans the gutters. He then climbs onto the roof, sets up a lawn chair, and reveals via voiceover that the house has no gutters and he uses this time to relax, a secret he keeps from his partner.
Creator: @slickstevietv on Instagram
Video format
Vlog
Video outline
- Present a believable premise
- Show actions supporting premise
- Subvert premise with a twist
- Confirm the new reality
Hook overview
Establish a mundane, long-standing routine to create a foundation of normalcy and expectation.
Verbal hook
So every week for the past year, me and Kayla have been doing the chores on Wednesday.
Visual hook
A woman is actively sweeping a tiled floor, creating immediate motion and a relatable household scene.
Hook strategies
- secrets-shortcuts
- curiosity-open-loops
Payoff
Provide a final visual confirmation of the deception, often from a new perspective, solidifying the joke and revealing the absurdity of the situation. The narrator explicitly states the secret is safe, making the viewer a co-conspirator.
Narrative framework
The Deceptive Routine
Narrative framework logic
To build a believable, relatable scenario and then completely subvert it with a comedic twist, making the audience an accomplice to a harmless secret.
Narrative framework breakdown
- frameworkName: The Deceptive Routine
- frameworkType: Standard Narrative
- coreLogic: To build a believable, relatable scenario and then completely subvert it with a comedic twist, making the audience an accomplice to a harmless secret.
- confidence: 95
- pendingStatus: created
Topics: Comedy, Relationships, Lifestyle
Concepts: Relatable Skit, Expectation vs. Reality
Formats: Vlog
Elements: Voiceover, Montage Editing
Account types: Personal Brand
Transcript excerpt
So every week for the past year, me and Kayla have been doing the chores on Wednesday. She cleans the inside of the worse, I go up on the roof and clean the gutters. Alright. I'm going to clean the gutters. Thanks for helping me, baby. Love you. Love you. She has been extremely appreciative of the extra help around the house. Everybody got it. The best part about it is is I don't even have better, and Kayla will never know.