Miami penthouse problems, things broken from @charbelmilann

The creator complains about the broken things in his Miami penthouse. He shows the view from his balcony and complains about the noise the door makes when he opens it.

Creator: @charbelmilann on Instagram

Video format

Yap

Video outline

  1. State luxury premise
  2. Acknowledge broken elements
  3. Showcase specific flaw
  4. Juxtapose flaw with view

Hook overview

Acknowledge luxury living with a caveat of broken elements.

Title hook

Everything's Broken in My Miami Pent (Why you shouldn't move here)

Verbal hook

Just moved here to Miami on the 40th Floor, and things are broken.

Visual hook

The video opens with a view of the Miami skyline through a large window.

Hook strategies

  1. credibility
  2. opinions-polarization

Payoff

Acknowledge the view while still highlighting the flaw.

Narrative framework

Problematic Luxury Reveal

Narrative framework logic

Highlighting the irony of expensive living with unexpected flaws.

Narrative framework breakdown

  • frameworkName: Problematic Luxury Reveal
  • frameworkType: Standard Narrative
  • coreLogic: Highlighting the irony of expensive living with unexpected flaws.
  • confidence: 90
  • pendingStatus: created

Topics: Real Estate

Formats: Yap

Account types: Personal Brand

Transcript excerpt

Just moved here to Miami on the 40th Floor, and things are broken. Like, I'm paying the most to be tier, and things are broken in this place. Let me give you an example. Like, for example, every single time I open this balcony, it it makes this noise. I I can't get it to go away. Every single time I repeat all the real niggas worldwide. Salute. Salute.

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